I am a year 5 student in room 1 at Kawakawa Primary School in Northland, New Zealand. My teacher is Whaea Lizzie. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a POSITIVE, THOUGHTFUL, HELPFUL comment.
Kia ora Ratu! Olive here from the Summer Learning Journey! How are you doing?
Thank you for your blog post! I really enjoyed reading your journal entry about Nelson Mandela’s experience in Prison. It was a very tragic thing that happened to Mr Mandela. I think you’ve written very well in this activity. Next time, have a go at using a proper diary entry format. For example:
Dear Diary,
Today I felt.... this was because. This happened because....
Yours, Nelson Mandela.
Ka pai for all your hard work! Remember the end of the Summer Learning Journey is this Friday 24th January! Keep up the blogging, commenting and enthusiasm!
Kia ora Ratu! Olive here from the Summer Learning Journey! How are you doing?
ReplyDeleteThank you for your blog post! I really enjoyed reading your journal entry about Nelson Mandela’s experience in Prison. It was a very tragic thing that happened to Mr Mandela. I think you’ve written very well in this activity. Next time, have a go at using a proper diary entry format. For example:
Dear Diary,
Today I felt.... this was because.
This happened because....
Yours, Nelson Mandela.
Ka pai for all your hard work! Remember the end of the Summer Learning Journey is this Friday 24th January! Keep up the blogging, commenting and enthusiasm!
Ngā mihi,
Olive
Kia ora Olive,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback. I will keep that in mind.
Thank you,
Ratu