The unknown Island

 Hi Bloggers,

For this blog post I had made a Narrative writing a few weeks ago our teacher told to make up our own Narrative writing since we were learning about writing so on this story there were two young boys one is Steven and one is Tom they were playing around until they had a an unknown call so they went and tried to look for the guy till they got to an unknown island so I don't want to spoil more I will just let you know by yourself. 

Here is my writing

The unknown island

Once there was a city called Enlard, there lived two boys, Tom and Steven. They were both 13 years old. Tom is the one who loves nature, he always hangs out in the trees and swings like a monkey. Steven on the other hand likes to go on big missions like it was his job. 

One day they were hanging out on the beach till they had a call from an unknown person and the phone answered it by itself. The boys were terrified but they knew the person's voice. It was just like they knew him but suddenly the phone died but Steven said, “ We have to get that person now.”

Tom was worried, he was sweating like an ice cream melting, but Steven knew what to do. He asked Tom if he had anything but Tom had nothing so Tom just told Steven to just go home and have some rest. On Saturday morning Steven woke up really early. He had some toast and some tea got dressed and ran to Tom’s house.

Tom on the other hand was just taking his time, he took a shower he had waffles and waited for Steven. Tom waited and finally Steven arrived. He took Tom and went to the beach and tried to make a wooden boat. There was this adult that came and helped him but in no time they got the boat done and went but the only thing that Steven and Tom said was “Thank You,” but the man left and the journey had to continue. 

Splish,splash,crash as the waves roughly moved the boat left to right Tom was crying Steven shouted out to Tom, “Tom come to me now before you get washed away.” Tom was worried he was just thinking about what would happen but Steven was a good mate he took a few steps to get him but the boat just flung them both up. They were just too unlucky, they hit the ocean like it was concrete. Days,and days later the boys found themself in a lonely island but in the distance on a rock they both saw an accent writing. Steven said, “That looks like alien writing,” but Tom said “It is just a really old rock with symbols.” 

On a fine day Steven went exploring until he found a really good hiding spot so he stayed there for a while. He ate some fruit and continued he managed to find a swimming place to swim but as soon as he got in something or somebody grabbed him and went underwater. A few hours went by and Tom was getting worried so he went to the place where they landed but he didn't see Steven. He saw a pack of tribes. The tribe wasn't happy; they were hungry just as soon as this was going to get even worse; it was not just a tribe that was here. There was also an army coming and this when I knew that it was going to be a war!

Months go past and the boys are still alive. They had found out a way to get in the accent rock so they had no more choice but to move. 1 years goes by and the boys somehow survive. That is why before they were lost they were always celebrated. We don’t know why but that is their story.